October Girl

Wow, this is really good. I'm blow away! You should extend this... and if you do, I'd like to know. So I can read the rest!

Welcome back once again! Just wanted to say CAN'T WAIT UNTIL YOU WRITE MORE!!!! And keep me posted cuz I wanna know what happens!!!! It's a great story and I ...

so what are you exactly trying to say? Coffee is good for the soul and yet bad for the body? Coffee is bitter? What exactly the point of this piece? ...

Aw! Ginger!!! I love it!!! :D

Oh geez, I loved this poem! It was so... depressing. It was great and no, you shouldn't change the name it fits perfectly. Nice job, good luck and keep writing.

I loved this poem because, it was short up to the point and you didn't bore me at all, lol. This was very creative, anyways welcome to YWS! Keep writng ...

Ah... your title... *rubs back of neck with arm* I can't help but feel like I'm being shouted at. No worries though. Um as for the poem it was OK ...

Well, I did like this poem.... but I do think you could have added a little more.... Maybe you could tell us what you like about him... Maybe this could ...

I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! It's got so much emotion behind it. You didn't force anything it flows together nicely. I have nothing more to say than.... WOW As always -Max

Thanks Suz, I was just venting though. It was how I was feeling. :roll:

Hello, dear. Max here. I loved this you didn't force or block anything out you let if off the paper and into the world... what more could a reader ask ...

Sometimes you don't get poetry... sometimes you do... In this case it was an emotional rollercoaster. I don't care if you don't get it. If you don't get it you ...

No one said they didn't like it, you can't take it too personal if they did. You just need to spill out your heart on this piece of work and ...

I didn't think it was bad at all, it was slow and flowing you didn't force anything you let it out on paper but I don't think that's the best ...

Some one relpy....... :evil: